We have created writing using the ideas of suspense we have learned through our mantle...

Anxious, I stood there thinking I would be O.K. until....the trees started to wave about.
I was scared, I didn't know what to do. Luckily, it was just the wind. There was a big, black cloud cloud coming over the great yellow shine of the sun - that was going to wreck it. Desperate, I screamed for my life. I smelt the smell of something I was about to discover. I ate a worm - man they were juicy.....